Thursday, September 13, 2007

My Poems Are All The Same? ? ? Comments

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I've never chosen my name,
choices were few in my life.
But i chosed to play the game,
i chosed you to share my life.
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Eman Awad
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Lucianne Fasolo 13 September 2007

There are some grammar mistakes in this poem, like 'chosed'. You need to work on it. If you fix these little problems it'll be good, :) .

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