My Poem You Are... Comments

i will borrow again the words of the author, , , speechless i am for this poem of yours.....below is a poem..its a souveneir for you... sweetheart ask me a smile and i will give you laughters ask me a care and i will give you the love ask me a kind heart and i will give you my honesty ask me to kiss you and i will give you the romance ask me to sleep beside you and i'll give you sleepless nights ask me to hug you then i'll give you the warmth ask me to sing and i'll give you the best voice ever ask me to bring you to heaven, i promise that all the time ask me to make you hot and i'll not give you cold nights ask me to tell the truth and i'll tell you no lies... naizxenia

Hi Hazem! What can I say about your poem? Everything you know, because the topic is unchanging. Love and her shades - it is your element. I don't know how in life but in writing certainly. You are a natural-born dreamer and a romantic. If the author is identifying himself with the lyric hero... it... women - trembling! ! ! He won't manage to enchant only 'her', because the 'she' enchanted him. Poem 'hot'. A climate is feeling and we can hear these all words, perhaps - too rarely used. And after all so pleasantly to listen to it, what for us nice - for our ear. Greeting the Author - almost casting spells...his hero :)) Maria Barbara Korynt

hazom u r so coooooooool poet, keep what you have sir.

A captive heart, jailed and imprisoned by love........the only inspiration of your poems.........Lovely! 10++++++++