Sunday, June 22, 2008

My Poem Comments

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i walk into the bathroom,
your lieing on the floor
i know what you did
and i know why you did it.
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black broken heart
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Joya Feghaly 11 April 2009

wawwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this poem is so amazing! ! ! ! i love it! ! ~BrOkEn~~HeArT~

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Bootiful Kid 24 June 2008

wow, you're friend in this poem is lucky to have a good friend that keeps promises! but we'll be friends for life! !

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Malini Kadir 24 June 2008

Thoughts are driven my inner longing for recognition......you need to find a job in entertaining, in media......perhaps.your abilities with poetic touch and flair for drama... will draw a real crowd! All the best

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Wandering Scarlet 22 June 2008

its so sad and joyful and tragic at the same time...great ideas

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black broken heart

black broken heart

in the arms of my love
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