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But in the truth In the real creation for mankind. NICE LIN ES...10 TRUELY SPOKEN BUT NOT AS TOKEN IT IS REAL IN ESSENCE AND NOT BY CHANCE

Last line of your poem is so true as if entire poem was meant for the last line,10/10

Comments on your poem ''my pleasure'' Commented on 12/29/2013 7: 44: 00 AM by Anne Lise Andresen - Nice to read, wahab! - well written - HAPPY NEW YEAR! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeff Cannon - - potent and stirring journey into claiming one's self, finding one's humanness underneath so many labels, clarifications, declensions of being. Then as if that is not enough, claim the consequence of that information, knowledge, body wisdom so as live in the expanding and ever widening landscapes of so many socially worlds likewise calibrated to accept or reject one by its volume of definitions. An ongoing pilgrimage inward and outward until we die not from exhaustion but merely from the last tick of our clock time here as earth creature co-inhabitor of unconditionally gifted wonder - thanks for this poem Abdul Wahab