Sunday, December 7, 2008

My Plea For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, what little I have,
to give to you this day.
My heart is aching and my hands are shaking,
and I'm thinking hard on what to say.
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kimber harrison
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A prayer that touches the heart. Keep writing.

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

this is a beautiful poem. i love the ending. i give it a 10! and i wish you the best of luck in your journey in getting closer to god. -stephanie

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Brianna Trombley 07 December 2008

another wonderful write, powerful throughout the whole poem

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