Thursday, June 25, 2009

My Players Comments

Rating: 5.0

Props scatter upon life's stage.
Images abound into parts.
Rigid fusions gather songs.
Wayward players dance long.
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JOE POEWHIT
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This is very cleverly crafted with great imagery. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Marvelous composition,10+++

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Carol Gall 25 June 2009

like this good imagination

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Ejaz Khan 25 June 2009

A great write Joe! Nice imagery and beautiful metaphors.

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Surya . 25 June 2009

what a great poem. wonderfully conceived and played voted10 surya

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enveloped illusion churn is into nothing....lovely and concised life

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rago rago 25 June 2009

the movements of chess.and the life too so is true......... spell bound write...

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