My Pillow Comments

I think you would be better off writing prose. Obviously the language is unfamiliar to you. Poemhunter has become a garbage bin, where all sorts of bad poetry festers. You need to write in prose. Most of your 'poem' is nothing but prose, and it is full of repetition. I am shocked that this Ramachandran does not know how to review poetry. He is only trying to flatter you and deceive you. Write in your native tongue. Write prose. Give up poetry altogether. You will live a happier and more healthy life!

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