Sunday, June 7, 2015

My Phone Comments

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Digital and small
My best friend all and all
I'd die without it
If you took it you'd get hit!
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 08 November 2016

in poet's notes i would use everywhere (one word) , though i've noticed some poets in U.K. and India seem to separate such words into two parts. and girl's phone.....typo? i have my cell on a chain attached to the ring piercing my lower lip! believe me? ? don't. hee-hee. nice rhyming and humor! ! or are you serious about breaking bones? oh no! ! ! ! bri :)

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