Monday, November 9, 2009

My Perverse Mind Comments

Rating: 4.3

My perverse mind will not stop..
Thinking..
Of the different ways to kill you..
To see you lifeless
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Jenna Marie
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Stephen Szachnitowski 03 March 2010

To say this is filled with emotion would be an understatement... I liked it. (Christopher Life - Everyone is insane, it's just a matter of how much.)

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Brennan Scotland 27 November 2009

I was there for nearly a year and a half. This poem makes it feel like yesterday. Your pain is nearly as strong as your skill as a poet. Keep writing. Absolutely brilliant!

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Chuck Wendigo 24 November 2009

i'd hate to be that guy

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Chance 23 November 2009

totaly love this poem it reminds me of the monster i talk about that i try to control Rawr! ! ! ! !

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Neil Singleton 22 November 2009

i think your words are fine art.. weather if you feel like that or not.. it makes you a strong person to wtire how you feel again i love this word you have let out from your heart i shall vote 8..

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I think I am scared of you now, after reading this. I like it, but it's really violent. I wouldn't say you're insane though, because I know sometimes I've thought things like that too. Or am I insane...?

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