My Personal Cocaine Comments

Damn! That sounds like a person I need. I like this one.

I see the highlight.. where one must sniff....10derly...

great poem mate! ! ! ! ur addicted to that thing called 'love'..that is so cute..definetely deserves a 10....

Amazing bro, absolutely amazing........may the highs of love bring shaky thighs and dizzy eyes.......You never fail to amaze me...many fine poets have come to live in you bro..*10+ stacks of dishes Jon

wow wow wow... (again) - this is not about lovemaking ALONE but also about sensual VERY intimate being together.... VERY good.

I believe so its a love poem.... much more a lovemaking! A 10.

The nose-bleed metaphor has a certain poignancy - later, the physicality of love's expression moves beyond mere coke-like addicition. Rgds, Ivan

Is this a love poem? It seems so -a weird love poem - I like the closing last line very much!

An analogy perfectly carried through.... and I hope you get your next fix soon. :) t x

Great poem David, love is the the best addiction to have,10 Lynda xx

This is absolutely fabulous David and described exactly how having someone love you equally, makes you feel! I remember it well and can say that all adversity that I met along the way, was nothing with My Personal Cocaine by my side....love is a wonderful gift. Very inspiring too it seems! Smiling, having just finished my final exam and am a free as Tai can be. great first read of my day.

Sounds like you've been kidnapped by that thing called love! ! ! How divine, there's no better addiction, for sure... HG: -) xx