Friday, March 20, 2009

My Perfect Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beauty, real beauty is beneath the skin
With the love that is shown and freely given
Given to a lover, also humanity
A heart offered without any charge
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

Beauty, real beauty is beneath the skin With the love that is shown and freely given Given to a lover, also humanity A heart offered without any charge For all those whose heart is crippled with grief Joy and happiness shown to all humankind By the soul which embraces life ------------ Awesome verses that can touch the heart of everyone...such a fine creation of beauty in inner depiction...10+++

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Thad Wilk 20 March 2009

You have painted an eloquent picture of perfect beauty, a poetic vision wonderfully expressed. Great read my friend! ! Best regards! *10*! Thad

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Stephen Stirk 20 March 2009

A beautiful and descriptive piece, with your own inimitable brand of imagery. Each of your poems demands a read. Those who pass on by, do so at your own loss. Great poem Gord Steve

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Gordon D Wilkinson

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