Thursday, November 27, 2008

My Pen Weeps: ( Comments

Rating: 2.8

Open with a wild sip
read and feel the heart rip
as our time slip
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Angelo H.G.
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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 November 2008

Very well structured, beautifully penned poem. Your similies and metaphors are very very special. You have the ability to tune the poem in accordance with the mood and content....excellent........10+++++++++++++=

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