Saturday, March 21, 2009

.. My Pen********* Comments

Rating: 4.8

Ideas small like tiny dots
Circulate to create
Greater thoughts
By using a pen.
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Eyan Desir
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Raj Nandy 16 June 2009

Yes, I do feel that you have written it well indeed! I saw a DVD Movie called the 'QUILLS' with Kate Winslet in it, do see it, you will like it! 10! - Raj Nandy

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sumaira .....ir 04 April 2009

wonderful! ! TRUE said... 10/10 lvu sumi

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 April 2009

great pen that which you have.. pen which supplied from a such loving heart.. well done, , keep on.. hazem al..

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Joscelyn Alderdice 30 March 2009

Yes the pen is a great instrument indeed. This poem states it well. Awesome work!

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Ivor Hogg 28 March 2009

THe pen is mightier than the sword and can be used for good or ill like all weapons or tools

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Really Very Nice BoSss

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Terry Coates 27 March 2009

This was a very very good poem how u use the pen to give your thoughts and to make the world a better place excellent job my friend.

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Serenity Prayer 25 March 2009

i wouldof never had the idea to write a poem like this. great job.

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Xy-za Dile 25 March 2009

such power of a pen can move a single soul. it is a beautiful write. =)

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Alf Hutchison 25 March 2009

From your pen to the world's ears Eyan. Well put

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Lalitha iyer 25 March 2009

Pen, but wait; lest your ink dry up and when new ideas crop up and ye find new papers .... pen not until you are upto the full.

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Shane Bonter 25 March 2009

Thats beautiful. the pen is the greatest weapon in any mans arsenal.

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Malcolm The Last. 22 March 2009

'Ideas small like tiny dots', but no, your ideas are big, man.

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you wrote it well... fine job! keep going.. I have 99.. you need to catch up to me soon.. im glad you did not stop on 50...

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Gordon Wilkinson 21 March 2009

i like this my friend ideas do that - 10

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Catrina Heart 21 March 2009

Words can kill, can make or break a person...and pen is mightier than a sword...great theme here Eyan....nice piece to share.

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