Monday, January 31, 2011

My Pearl Comments

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Angel, my pearl
Are you on the high mountains?
Can you once see the depth of love below?
You are our spirit, strength and purpose.
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Rekha Mandagere
COMMENTS
Louis Cecile 18 July 2011

Nice concept with the comparison of love and the pearl. The constant questions help to engage the reader and realise what love is more important.

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Yoseph Lupu 11 May 2011

GREAT, TOUCHING, LOVING, SENSITIVE, ....NICE WRITTING!

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Jon Arno 18 April 2011

Rekha, you have such a powerful love within you. I cant remember the last time I met someone with such dedication and unconditional love Very nice work

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Luz Hanaii 28 February 2011

Written like only a mother could. A fine line between love and pain. I know because I'm also a mother. I loved your poem.

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Jenny Gordon 16 February 2011

Poignant with the passionate longing affection of a mother for her cherished pearl of great price in her dear son....beautiful. It depicts her love realistically, and so very touchingly....how very sweet! And again, excellent tribute to that special relationship the Lord has given them both for a precious moment of time.

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Marcus Mckinley 15 February 2011

sometimes the brightest light can flood the darkness creating a new blindness. you can not see him through it nor can he see you. yet you still know each other are there somewhere.

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