Tuesday, August 6, 2013

My Paru Comments

Rating: 4.0

I lost the rhythm of my heart beat
I lost my vision of the eyes
I lost the flexibility of my tongue
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
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Dinesan Madathil 12 January 2014

Your Paru is your pride and you have done her proud..

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

What a lovely poem on love! Blessed you and Paru are! Thanks for the note.

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Etcetera Rose 08 August 2013

this is very beautiful...she's lucky to have a man love her so much

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R.j. Wynn 07 August 2013

sweet. reminds me of my life and my wife.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful poem...He still and always waits for his love paru...Loved reading it.

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