I have a new pet parrot,
That eats green chillies and carrots.
She has a big, fat, red beak,
That is always found when she peeps.
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Nice inductive ending whice always adds to keeping suspense. Keep writing.
Whatever I say, she repeats, When I sing, the rhythm and beats. Although it is an imaginative write, there is so much of longing and love in this poem. you are so young. write my young poetess. you will be a great poetess known in the world. wish you all luck. tony