Thursday, July 21, 2022

My Paralysed Cousin Comments

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He is my cousin,
My aunt's only son,
Clever, eight years elder than me.
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

I've read more, and 16 years have PASSED I see. Last line seems to fit his situation. I wonder if there is a therapy available to him to help him cope better.

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Wei Chao 13 August 2022

You are right. Thanks for the correction.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Welcome, 'new poet' Wei, to this site. I wonder if 'passed' would be more correct in stanza 5. : )

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Nabakishore Dash 22 July 2022

shocked to know about this disease.He needs inspiration.

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Wei Chao 21 July 2022

Thanks for the comment and feedback, Aufie. Health is one of the most important pillar of life.

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Aufie Zophy 21 July 2022

Thought provoking write. To help or to need help. Living a life of meaning or a life of depending on others. Loneliness. I pray and wish for your cousin that he finds again some meaning

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