Tuesday, October 19, 2004

My Painful Dream... Comments

Rating: 4.7

My bed and pillow will tell you about my dream
That I see you every night in my dream
You don't know my pain that I go through
without you being close to me
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Ravi Sathasivam
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 27 August 2014

Plain and simple diction. Read, feel, like and share it. Well done Ravi.

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Ameera Aidrus 02 September 2009

good poem......................

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Seema Aarella 02 September 2009

nice title....goes well with the painful feelings of love! ! ! thanks for sharing!

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

excellent simile: ''Because my love on you like an ocean and cannot be erased You came into my life with full of love and affection'' excellent abstract lyric poem, lovely to read....................10+++++

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Surya . 02 September 2009

a rare poem.touching the heart.nice write. voted10 surya

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Surya . 02 September 2009

a rare poem.touching the heart.nice write. voted10 surya

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Lady Grace 02 September 2009

lav this piece dear..expressive...i love this, promise..

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