Thursday, January 24, 2019

My Pain You Gain Comments

Rating: 5.0

You break me to pieces
A plaything like
And ask me to keep smiling
Smiling I would remain
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 February 2020

A powerful and incisive poem. When our heart is full of pain, it will become indifferent to any feeling. It becomes numb on love to whoever caused the pain. Strong and incisive words that cut like a knife.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 February 2020

Heartbreak! ! ! ! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2019

a You can never hurt me no more poem. Powerful; y declamated. I call this The Boomerang poem. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 24 January 2019

A very soft handling of and a sensible commentary on a complex human relationship. Thanks for sharing this fine poem.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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