Thursday, November 14, 2013

My Pain My Pleasure Comments

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Oh!
my pain
you are the reason
for longing me
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ramesh rai
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

Beautiful poem on extreme ends Pain and Pleasure. But it travels together. Good write.

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Yasmin Khan 17 November 2013

Both pain and pleasure are ecstatic experiences, written nicely

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 November 2013

There is no pleasure without pain. At times pain itself is pleasure for some. Also pain is of two kinds one is painful pain and the other pleasant pain. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Wow one of yor best in metaphor! I love to read n use grandiloquent terms like u did in poems. Both pain n pleasure r transient to me.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 November 2013

hopeful sky my universe, I like it, thanks.

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