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In the tears of the flute
I've lost far beyond
The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry
She's crying and crying, but why?
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Pains of life! ! ! ! Never give up on your dreams! Thanks for sharing.
The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry...Such a poignant poem indeed...Thank you for sharing, Marjan. A highest 10.
a poetry full of love enthusiasm..., but so sad is this poem.... best wishes for you... dr. riza
thank you from my deepest being for your lovely and inspiring responses.
you don't like my comments ung man nor do u answer them nor do u read my poetry so now i will remain silent
A poem so full of pathos that tugs at your heart strings. The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry. wonderful imagery created through this line. You have a golden pen Sheikh that can create beautiful poems.10++
I thank you from my deepest being for your lovely and inspiring responses. Immense thanks for the excellent feedback, Mrs Geeta Radhakrishna Menon. Best wishes for you.
So sad.... Departure of love is sadly depicted.... Keep it up... Best wishes Naila
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7/28/2025 12:39:32 PM # 1.0.0
Bravo! 10++++++++++++++++++++++
thank you my dear friend