Friday, March 6, 2009

My Pain Comments

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One day I saw the pain lying on the ground
I looked at him and asked about his feelings
as he saw me he started crying.
I ask him again and again
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sandeep patil
pain Feelings
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Reshma Ramesh 06 March 2009

hmmm.........loved the thought.......must work on the structure............keep writing

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Barry A. Lanier 06 March 2009

Enjoyed your creativ version of pain and empathy.....hope you'll check out my poem 'Acceptance'..thanks for sharing

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