Tuesday, November 18, 2008

My Pain Comments

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Billy Joe Collins 18 November 2008

that fog of pain it can become blue skies what a great poem thanks for sharing

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hidden poet 18 November 2008

that fog that shrouds your path can be dispelled. you simply need a breath of fresh air to banish it. i know speaking in metaphors makes things difficult to understand sometimes...thats the poet in me. but i suppose what i mean is that you need something different in your life to make it have more meaning. something that brings you to life inside. try looking into making music or art or working with animals or children things like that. helping other people really helps bring meaning into your life as well

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May Namoc 18 November 2008

running may seem like the right choice but running from your problems are never the answer. face up to them and put them down, talk about and maybe your confusion will clear up. someone who will listen, someone to share the pain with is all anyone really needs. great peice btw. May

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