My Pain Comments

i love how you pour out your heart into your poems. and this is a great example of it..amazing lines wow im captivated =)

there is a story by Chinmayananda the post and the ghost at night the post would look like a ghost same upon throwing light becomes post so it is a question of perception the optimist consider situations that are adverse as challenges life is about tackling challenges rather than enjoying a comfortable ready-made life hope Makayla agrees with me...God bless you

Life as a teenager can be tough. Kids can be mean. Parents can be difficult to understand. Teachers can be insensitive. Hang in there!

It is painful state of pain. Nicely composed.

WOW your really good but pain can be destroyed by love