Thursday, February 5, 2009

My Own Reflection Comments

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This feeling,
My suffering,
Not healing,
Just muffling,
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Derrick Andrews
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Peter Clarkson 06 February 2009

Remember, No Limits, Just hurdles to Jump over! ! ! Think positive, I understand it is hard at this time, but without it as you said, 'My Suffering Not healing'. I feel reading your poems that the true you are not evil as you say, but a warm, loving individual, who has a lot to give! I travel to see My Derrick tomorrow, I have missed him so much and can't wait to hold him in my arms. Don't Suffer! reach out to to those that love you!

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Callie Carroll 05 February 2009

Nice use of rhythm and rhyme.

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