Tuesday, September 6, 2016

My Own Little Hell Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am nothing, but an obsolete freak
Leading a life so petty and meek
I wander about, in my own little hell
Formed of the smiles of those doing well
...
Read full text

Daniel Pace
COMMENTS
Annette Aitken 08 September 2016

Wow...what a powerful write...I am so glad that you shared this on with us..it is remarkable....reading your pain sharing it with you..hopfully will help you....to know and understand that we have all felt like this at one stage or another...aandd you have penned it perfectly Annette.

0 0 Reply
Tom Billsborough 07 September 2016

I am glad of your note too. This was written about three years ago. Depression caused by the fear of rejection is very distressing and you have expressed it with depth and honesty. I admire your introspective courage. Poets such as Lowell and Plath dared to express their inner fears. Perhaps your writing about them created a catharsis. It certainly created a very favourable impression on me. Well done.

0 0 Reply
Daniel Pace

Daniel Pace

Salt Lake City, Utah
Close
Error Success