My Own Friend Comments

you used the metaphor like professionals! ! ! you could wonderfully personify the poem like a friend.....this have to be estimated....and you have to develop the talent in you on your own....by reading poems of different poets.in addition, you used the rhyming well.....keep on writing poetess! ! ........and thanks for a wonderful poem.......................omar

what do u think i'll say other than beautiful.

Nice poem.......nice to know your feeling and i think it is all the poets who really love poetry felling........good work.....Merna