My Other Love Comments

Don’t want to be thrasonical, - But made me into a pearl. Rachel Ann Butler

Your admiration for him seems unwavering and that's the way it must be.

as long as the world lives and as long as the sun stays may he stay with you always...always... this is touching....reminded me of my grandpa...

Anju, you are not a god poet but a good lady also. You have a mind full of sympathy and you create an immortal one.

What a beautiful poem dedicated to your grandfather....it must so be difficult to watch him getting frail - but love is the best tonic for him...I am sure he treasures his relationship with you his loving grand daughter...10+++

a lovely write very live...i haven't had a grandpa..this poem brings to mind a very good relationship

Lovely, marvelous, beautiful dedication to a loving grandpa. I know he is looking down at you now, smiling, an endless smile. Thanks for sharing...

I hope these lines rest his soul in peace.......10++

I was eager to see who made up all these beautiful things, Strangely enough I've been thinking more and more of my grandfather lately who has moved on ages ago, but he always held a special place in my heart. Thankyou for sharing,10++

very nice and beautifully scripted........10+

Anjali, This is really a very beautiful poem capturing the love you feel for him.10 here. Jim

My other love My hoary hear canopy Or my earthly panoply That shelters me from Pain and agony. Is Sweeter than honey And dearer than money. Good work A++++10

Anjali, there are some relationships which are difficult to describe in words. But you have expressed it so beutifully, effortlessly and naturally. Cudos to you. Similies, metaphors and epithets in your poems are a criss-cross multicoloured fountains of Vrindravan Gardens. CP

A great tribute to your grandfather. Excellent write. I always enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing with me

lovely colorful metaphors, one can only envy the devotion and compassion expressed in a lovely poem

Grandfathers might be happy with this poem. But fathers like me also... Nicely composed. So 10.

Now he’s helpless, Unstable as the wind, Frail as a lily, But inexhaustible as the deep blue sea, Immaculate as an angel, Steadfast in his devotion.............. Anjali, you are so immaculate in this poem. Flawless...captivating...spell binding effect.

It seems a little Song of Songs. Nostalgia plays its role. Another role is played by the finding of something old in a new contest. The trust of a girl in a wonderful wilderness.

Oh what a wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Very wonderful read,

totally awesome! i love the lines: 'Told me many stories, of gods and goddesses, ' brings butiful pictures in my minds eye thank you anji you write butifuly love Lisa