Monday, October 31, 2011

My Other Car Is A Volvo Comments

Rating: 3.3

You are a brown dumpster
With wheels. And me smiling,
Wearing my new sunglasses
Driving you crazy sitting on
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Scotty Dogg
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Laughing@ You 25 October 2013

So reminds me of one of my all-time favorite poets: Charles Bukowski! I just love his informal conversational style. There are a few misspellings of words, at least, I think they're not there for effect? ? Your work is appealing to me, a little at a time.

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Sandy Player 31 December 2012

I could tell it was a Volvo without the title...

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Silentpoet Grl 31 October 2011

Such a unique and clever witted writer you are! Good work.

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