Tuesday, November 4, 2008

((My Only You)) Comments

Rating: 3.0

I was born naked
with bare hands clinched
holding nothing else but
this subtle breath of life
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 October 2009

Finest thoughts flowing smoothly...Marvin Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lingerie-IG or other poems. niv

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Fay Slimm 08 December 2008

A beautiful declaration of life and love - and brought in from the beginning too when neither can be experienced at first, gives the reader a glimpse into time from a human standpoint......very well thought out Marvin.

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

'That i found my only you'. Great line and a poem filled with so much heart felt emotion is just staggering. Great job. Loved it. Gave it an easy tenner. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 November 2008

superb! ! Eloquent........captured a lot and the love came out from heart! 10+++

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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