My Only Friend Comments

This was a nice read.. The feelings u have for your fren and the faith you have in him is flourishing in this poetry...

This was a nice read.. The feelings u have for your fren and the faith you have in him is flourishing in this poetry...

This is a beautiful poem. It shows how passionate you are about your friend, whose heart you seek to avoid being lost in the 'deadly desert' or waves of ocean or in the icy grave. The two lined fourth stanza is really a piece of gem! Regarding your friend's being 'near to my heart but far from my brain' I had similar feelings when I wrote my poem 'Head Versus Heart'. If you have time, please read it and see if you can relate. Your poem closes with the last line, 'You are my FRIEND'. The caption says, this friend is your 'only friend'. Why so? Why you have no other friend? On a different subject though, I have a poem titled 'My Friend'. You may like to read it if time permits.

Had a pleasant reading. That's a beautiful poem indeed. So vividly expressed! So spiritually spoken. So innocently prsented! It's always good to go through such poetic manifestation.