My Only Dream Comments

Sweet dream, but imbued with innocence.Try hard to be shining and cooling all others on the earth.Sweet desire.

My only dream Is to pluck the moon From the sky.............wow excellent; loving expression Reserve the moon in the rosy heart which has bloomed for the love!

Wonderful poem! To pluck the moon and put it in the pocket and bring it home. I wish we could do that......dear Poetess Arzoo.......Top stars

Simply fantastic.........thanks for sharing.....anjandev roy.

As a child, everyone would have dreamed “To pluck the moon From the sky Put it in my pocket Bring it home and Hide it in my treasure chest.“ On growing up, it is only the color and shades of the moon that does change; the dream remains.

Moon has been the subject and center of many of our dreams. This one is absolutely fabulous and nostalgic in nature. Thanks for this fine poem.

And the innocent wish Wish to live furnish Down in your treasure chest Safe and secure like a bud in sepals.... beautiful verse. Thank-you.

Wow, let this 9nnocent wish remain as is else I won't be able to get the inspiration to write poems. Don't take my moon away. A fantastic poem Aarzoo, after long gap.10****

A fine poem. We all have wished to hold the moon in our hands at least once

Hope your wish would get fulfilled someday. A nice poem. Short and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

A very cute and tender write! Facinating poetic expression. Loved reading this wonderful short work of yours! Top 🌟