Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, October 23, 2013

My Only Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh, my dear daughter
I really burst me into laughter
You were praising in hymns
My name was repeated by name
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this. Sukmawati Komala Thank you deary bro Hasmukh Mehta appreciate so much for this lovely poem wishing you all the best ever 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

Eyes Juwita Heart 6 hours ago · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Great! Danielle Erin2 minutes ago I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across. My favourite line was, my feet were dancing. Comment 0 good child

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Nice Mendoza 2103 minutes ago I like it Comment 0 :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Rachel Chappell3 minutes ago Good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world Steven Gress1 minute ago Thank you for sharing your poem. Comment +1 Father's love

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Natasha M3 minutes ago I liked it but I feel there's lots of room for improvement

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Oh, my dear daughter I really burst me into laughter

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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