Oh, my dear daughter
I really burst me into laughter
You were praising in hymns
My name was repeated by name
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Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this. Sukmawati Komala Thank you deary bro Hasmukh Mehta appreciate so much for this lovely poem wishing you all the best ever 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Great! Danielle Erin2 minutes ago I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across. My favourite line was, my feet were dancing. Comment 0 good child
Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem
Nice Mendoza 2103 minutes ago I like it Comment 0 :)
Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world Steven Gress1 minute ago Thank you for sharing your poem. Comment +1 Father's love
Natasha M3 minutes ago I liked it but I feel there's lots of room for improvement
Oh, my dear daughter I really burst me into laughter
Shi Ricks Walker, Yampriy Aashish and 2 others like this.