My One Small Footprint...(100th) ... Poem by Annette Aitken

My One Small Footprint...(100th) ...

Rating: 5.0


My One Small Footprint...


I am starting to believe
that going through all
this pain,
the hurt,
the lies,
that there is, another plan for me.
Destiny,
has more in store for me,
a new path for me to travel.
Could it be to share my words?
to touch other's, without the psychical
to inspire,
to give deeper meaning to my life
to convince me to carry on
strive to enhance my life.
Not for the psychical,
but the mental rewards.
To wrap me up in my own arms of safety.
Is this my chance to maybe leave?

My one small footprint,
behind in this world.



by


A.A.17

Tuesday, February 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my 100th poem, and I would just like to thank you all on PH for hepling me to achieve this. Thank you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 26 February 2017

Congratulations on this being your 100th poem on PH. That is a definite milestone that probably answers your inner questions about destiny. To write ideas and feelings down on paper is exacting mental work. It refines your thoughts, directs their course, make you see how much you've grown through time, and give your work proper closure! ! ! Dang, I love this closure- - - - ] My one small footprint, behind in this world.[- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Awesome! ! ! ! A 10.

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Mj Lemon 16 February 2017

Footprints....they forge the path, and this enables others to journey. This poem is a great way to celebrate 100. A 10.

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Christopher Tye 14 February 2017

Really nice and thoughtful poem, you've managed to achieve a massive amount in just under nine months and poemhunter is a much greater place with your poetry.

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Tom Billsborough 14 February 2017

You have a lot to give, Annette. We shall be following your footprints for a long time to come. Unless we are dancing. Then you'll be too busy side-stepping my clodhopper boots! 100 poems and you've hit a lot of boundaries. What a gal!

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Bill Cantrell 14 February 2017

Awesome poem Annette, this is a masterpiece poem, we can touch others with our words, that is what is so wonderful about poetry, keep up the great work my friend! ! ! ! : -)

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