Wednesday, February 23, 2011

My One Moment Of Eternity Comments

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To be here in this moment eternally
to feel my breath, my heart,
every ache and pain
and each cell that lives within me
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Luz H.
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Akhtar Jawad 24 September 2018

A moment of eternity is better than a decade of life.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 August 2018

All I know is, at this time that I'm here eternally breathing, beating, hurting, thinking if only for this one moment of my eternity. the present moment is eternal..... wonderful thinking......... we should all think like that. present moment is the most important moment.. then we will be happy always...... thank u for this.. tony

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Cody Williamson 07 March 2011

The moment, and our mortality are wonderfully combined in this lovely poem. You write with such splendid candor!

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