My One Last Goodbye Comments

Such a beautiful place described here, I too have this hope in my heart. TFS

Your words envelope me as I believe it all to be true. Bliss, total bliss, love it.

Something deep and spiritual hit me here, Lyn Paul, your words have an effect, a strong one, just like a born teacher has: There is picturesque white cloud and sky so blue, Absolute sunshine with songbirds making me believe I am still with you. So if you feel that you are Knocking on Heavens Door Let the gates open, you will fear no evil. You will never be poor.

What a lovely vision of heaven above, written with great panache! Inspired write!

To know that a great world awaits us is really heartening!

enjoyable...great write..splendid..hats off

I feel this write has a bit different than others of yours....and it always good, you bring your own thought in a circular view, i mean you did write in a new way..Peace is a bless when it comes it erase all dark shadow and kiss us like a wind from heaven, good enough for us to feel calm_SOul

This leaves me in less dread of Death! I also imagine that God's kingdom would be full of beauty, enchantment and bliss! Enjoyed this beautiful picture of the world beyond death! !

Nicely penned poem, I love the rhyming! May we all find peace, when in fact, it comes to us... Titi (Btw, AMAZING poem)

What an uplifting piece!

Beautiful Lyn, very imaginative write. Enjoyed reading very much.