My One Conceit Comments

I like the sound of your One Conceit! She obviously sweeps you off your, male dominating feet, but! She obviously also keeps you and your poetry sweet. And that is all that matters... Smiling at you Tai

Curious title on this strangely stirring poem. thanks for this one (smile)

'make my mouth yours'...beautiful beginning...and throughout.....

Most lovely phraseology and use of words to perfection. HG: -) xx

that is beautiful....