Sunday, September 30, 2007

My One And Only Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the morning hits
Give way to the sun,
Another day without you
Has begun.
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Theany Ouy
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Neela Nath Das 16 May 2014

A passionate poem indeed.This is the fresh feeling for one's lover or beloved.it tends to be eternal.Great!

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(De Va) 05 November 2011

amazing....you are so filled with passion...again, you reach out to my soul and touch a place where I understand every word....check out a song by Leonard Cohan...In my Secret Life.... You just might enjoy his works...hugs n blessings

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Sajna Kailas 29 October 2011

how great your love is! ! ! ! beautifully written, nice work shows that you an emotional poet! ! ! ! !

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Maria C. Pires Costa 27 May 2010

Affective lines, conveying lovely emotions and the dream of 'being together forever'. Nice flow in rhyming likewise.

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 21 May 2010

Though it seems that only the memory just be forever.. again..nice deeper emotions

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Chris Hall 19 October 2007

Great poem! I only wish I had thought of it. Thanks for sharing.

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