Tuesday, November 18, 2008

My One And Only Cure Comments

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I’m just a bird that’s already flown away,
There’s nothing you can do to make me stay,
I have this longing that’s impossible to ignore,
Still, there’s so much that I’ve got left in store.
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Chantal Lammerts
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Fiona Davidson 19 November 2008

I like this one...beautifully put...freedom is good but sometimes we all need comfort too...thank you for sharing Chantal....

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Frances Warwick 18 November 2008

I am reading this poem with some thought....I think I understand what you are saying! ...Freedom is good to have from ever being smothered...but what are you escaping from? Its a good verse, thankyou for sharing

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