The last words she whispered, the warmth of her breath,
Taken away so quickly, by the coldness of death,
How those words tangle around my aching heart,
Strangling my soal, it tears me apart.
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this is a very sad and touching poem.i can feel the pain.plase read mine The Night Visitor wher i too experienced a loss of a loved one. well done love pam
Very touching. You know the man has lost the one he loves and you are able to feel his pain.
death may separate human beings, but not the vestiges existing in the mind, memories, or thought.. very beautiful poem indeed..