Monday, February 2, 2009

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The last words she whispered, the warmth of her breath,
Taken away so quickly, by the coldness of death,
How those words tangle around my aching heart,
Strangling my soal, it tears me apart.
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lindsey ashton
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Kite Remedy 03 February 2009

death may separate human beings, but not the vestiges existing in the mind, memories, or thought.. very beautiful poem indeed..

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Darkness J 03 February 2009

Such a touching lovely poem.

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Michael P. Johnson 03 February 2009

I Know my friend, oh how I know

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Laurena Willetts 02 February 2009

this is a very sad and touching poem.i can feel the pain.plase read mine The Night Visitor wher i too experienced a loss of a loved one. well done love pam

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Christine Kerr 02 February 2009

Very touching. You know the man has lost the one he loves and you are able to feel his pain.

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Gary Fellows 02 February 2009

Very sincere and toching Lyndsey, great stuff. Gary Fellows

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Eric Adams 02 February 2009

beauty heart warming fufilling poem

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lindsey ashton

lindsey ashton

wigan, manchester UK
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