Saturday, March 17, 2012

My Old Hat Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've got this old cowboy hat
It's my favorite one to wear,
It's about the only thing I own
That I'm not willing to share;
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Smoky Hoss
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Patti Masterman 30 March 2012

I really think he will understand (smile) . I see a lotta living in this poem, (that always makes the best poetry doesn't it? You have to live a lot to write something..clearly you've done just that. Thanks for writing for us, condensing years and wisdom into something palatable and beautiful at the same time.. you make it look almost easy sometimes. :)

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Neela Nath Das 20 March 2012

Wonderful poem with cinematic effect.

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Claudia Krizay 19 March 2012

This is great! I love the ending and I hope the good Lord understands and keeps that hat on you! I have a feeling that he will! Excellent write! - CAK

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Dave Walker 17 March 2012

Really like it a really great poem. I have a guitar that i feel the same way about. A great write.

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Eric Cockrell 17 March 2012

have one i wear that's even more beaten up than i am... and a part of me! so i understand this one well!

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