My Old Friend Comments
I am the wraith
In your misty eyes
Vagarious entity within
I metamorphasize
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I am the wrath in your misty eyes.... My dear old friend That's a bit of a contrast... Or is it? Watch out! This is a great poem. You use the English language well and your point so deftly made! I must admit you made me turn to the dictionary to confirm the nuances and accuracy of your word choices. Well done. Why no punctuation?
As for the punctuation, I rarely use it in my poetry because I think its absence gives the reader to interpret the message in different ways.
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7/23/2025 9:39:23 AM # 1.0.0
Would be easier to read with a bit of punctuation :)