My Old Bicycle Comments

I really enjoyed reading your poem, Vincent...A clever and interesting write! Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem with us. ++++10 Cheryl♡

What a precious poem about the memories attached to a beloved bicycle! But it's the last stanza where the bike really endears itself to us. Wonderful writing!

in the bikes heavily worn saddle ... nice finish Vin!

but, it's the rescue of twin baby girls clad in matching pink jumpers wandering, alone in a busy intersection....my bike as heavenly. experience teaches us and we become saviors in this world. thank u for this beautiful and simple poem. your simplicity is ur stregnth. tony

nice verb VV - planted....