My Office Comments

Something of the knight in shining armor about the subject of your narrative. With all his fine gadgets, your modern NCO is still after all just a king in his virtual-castle. Clever conclusion to this nicely paced poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

:) You almost convinced me that 'all that things are enough for to reach kind of your nirvana - your 'swiveling contentment' :) . Well penned, with the common dose of irony to be some peppery as usual. Best wishes, one