My Ocean Of Sorrow Comments

a very good poem intense with emotion and a very good flow that is structured quite well.

Nice and very poetic of describing sorrows and pain. Somehow in retrospect a lot of our sorrows get something supernatural in them They go and come back in different forms and shapes and yet we yearn and learn acceptance and detachment. We let them go and actively replace them. Very thought provoking poem. It really got me thinking. excellent!

Sad, but beautiful rendition of sorrow. Love your image of the white wooden boat floating on top of all the pain and sorrow. A poetical way to deal with it all, very creative. Thank you, RoseAnn

Poetry is a good medium for expressing our feelings. You have written this well. I hope you continue to ride your white boat until it reaches the shore. Irene

Wow simply marvelous! The rhymin n creativity here is impresive here! Great to read u again.

I liked the poem describing the sorrows and pains what is heart felt.

Beautiful, heartfelt poem, great imagery and beautifully written.

All my agonies and sufferings Melted into the waters Which became blue in pains. And I floated a white wooden boat Into the blue blue waters Of pangs And pains Of sorrows. I really enjoyed the poem - uneasy ideas in easy words.