Monday, July 27, 2015

My November Pain Comments

Rating: 4.5

And so I thought that this was my luckiest month
my birthmonth to be exact,
I didn't expect that pain is coming
didn't know that I'll be hurting
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Maria Victoria Lurian
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Fer Onti 30 May 2018

I like the way you write about pain that comes from love. I think you are a very direct poet and I love that. Hoping you post a new poem.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 July 2015

A month full of lies and doubts many of us have experienced longer and longer periods like that.. Thanks for sharing, Maria

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Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Your words truly express your displeasure and pain. Truly, some people come into our lives as lessons. Lessons we need for a better future. We may in one way or another have to let them go to create room for those who should come to come. You write well. Good work

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