Monday, April 13, 2009

My Nightmare Comments

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im down on my knees, hands crossed, praying to the man up above
hear me please, hear me please, im begging you on my knees
you cant take him, hes not yours, hes mine, hes only mine
i look at him on the hospital bed dying, thats it youve crossed the line
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Fiona Davidson 24 April 2009

This is an amazingly strong and powerful write Sapphire...well written...10+++

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Silvermist Love 22 April 2009

Amazing i love itz very powerful and u hve a strong message

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Nakita Ball 13 April 2009

this is so amazing i love this poem it sends a very strong message

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sapphire santiago

sapphire santiago

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