Monday, September 7, 2009

My Night With Cinderella Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember when I met Cinderella
at the ball.
She was so beautiful
like a fountain
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Justin Tanabe
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Shanna Elizabeth 28 March 2010

i really enjoyed this poem. i can really connect with it. i feel like i have met my prince but he got away and i just wish upon the stars for his return. and i liked the twist from happy ending to wishing upon stars it makes the story more realistic. much love, shanna

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