Tuesday, September 20, 2016

My Newly-Wed Bride Comments

Rating: 5.0

My newly-wed bride wore a dress as blue as the morning sky.
Adorned with the most charming smile she crowned my hand.
We walked in a paradisal atmosphere after all was said and done.
Caressed by a summer's breeze with the deepest feelings to beautify
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Bernadette Meessen 13 March 2019

Hi Paul My goodness you know how to give your bride a fully wonderful description Wow, Thanks for sharing

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Zoila T. Flores 02 October 2016

I always believe that words are powerful in our saying, and it's not the exception in this beautiful piece of poetry. Greetings, Zoila T. Flores

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Paul Amrod 03 October 2016

Thank you very much Zoila. I enjoy your wonderful verses as well, Greetings, Paul

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Anzelyne Shideshe 26 September 2016

Passionate gestures expressed in this poem thanks for sharing .

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Paul Amrod 26 September 2016

Thanks Anzelyne I really did just get married! All the best, Paul

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Paul Amrod

Paul Amrod

Chateaugay, New York
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