My Newest Poem.... Comments
What If the sun does not always rise every morn?
What If you always get that scorn?
What If the love you have got, and you are so fond of, one day just fades,
what If this love is only the imaginations of your shades?
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Sylvia, your poem should flow freely. Does it? I always point out in my comments about avoiding cliches in poetry.
Yes you are right Robert. I doubt whether this will flow freely now, I reckon. Thank you for your advice.
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8/2/2025 8:51:50 PM # 1.0.0
If sun will not rise daily there will be darkness. If love will not be her n Earth this will turn in to a planet of sorrow. With dun love sun rises here and light is continuously sprinkled to replace darkness into light. No one has promised a rose garden but we can build a new rose garden by love to get peace. You have brilliant idea to express this magnificent poem....10